Nice one. If you had evened out the light on the wall it might become even more graphic.
Nice find. From everyday objects you are putting together a nice compilation of angles that will make a lovely poster!
Very nice composition. I think you needed extra light to even out the lighting. The gradient takes away from the strong graphic feeling it is attempting to achieve. Eurydice
I agree with the above comments although you could even it out with a simple curves adjustment on a separate layer as well.
I also agree about the lighting. It would make the shot more graphic and abstract to me
Well done making this shot much more what it was attempting to be.
Nice one. If you had evened out the light on the wall it might become even more graphic.
ReplyDeleteNice find. From everyday objects you are putting together a nice compilation of angles that will make a lovely poster!
ReplyDeleteVery nice composition. I think you needed extra light to even out the lighting. The gradient takes away from the strong graphic feeling it is attempting to achieve.
ReplyDeleteEurydice
I agree with the above comments although you could even it out with a simple curves adjustment on a separate layer as well.
ReplyDeleteI also agree about the lighting. It would make the shot more graphic and abstract to me
ReplyDeleteWell done making this shot much more what it was attempting to be.
ReplyDelete